Sunday, 19 July 2015

The spook of waking up in winter!

WALT describe one thing with extra detail
We will:
Make a word bank
Use precise vocabulary 
Write impacting sentences that make sense
Partner conference

Boop Boop Boop Boop! The alarm burst into life. Why oh why did I not turn it off last night!
My arm crept out of the blanket sending back a shivering vibration telling me not to get out until 
we get a heat pump in my room! I slipped down to the bottom of my bed tiptoeing to the door,
dragging my blankets behind me. Suddenly I broke into a sprint, fleeing into the warm, cozy, 
Electric blanket infested bed. Stretching out to comfort, I fell asleep...

1 comment:

  1. Wow Eva!!!! Excellent piece of writing... The words you have used have really helped me to visualise a picture in my head! As I am reading this writing, I have a huge smile on my face imagining you doing this in the wee hours of the morning, dashing to our bed for a snuggle :) We need to get onto that writing task for Suzanne eh? xx Dad xx